Comments on: Don’t ask me nothin’ about nothin’, I just might tell you the truth.

By: patri

patri — Fri, 13 Jan 2006 14:08:26 +0000

I have absolutely no authority on poetry or lyrics, so I wouldn’t be able to comment, but I would love to read some of your songwriting some time.

By: Gustavo

Gustavo — Fri, 13 Jan 2006 07:07:43 +0000

“…unanswered cell phones insured their masculinity.”

So you’re from the school of thought that says that we should…hacerlas sufrir? or am I off here?

By: irasali

irasali — Thu, 12 Jan 2006 22:37:10 +0000

i didn’t know you did fiction. i enjoyed it.

By: moreno

moreno — Wed, 11 Jan 2006 21:48:48 +0000

that was sweet. i love modern theater

By: HispanicPundit

HispanicPundit — Wed, 11 Jan 2006 21:22:57 +0000

Don’t forget the best part of his fictional story EMC, the Mexican made by far the more cogent arguments.

By: patri

patri — Wed, 11 Jan 2006 17:06:14 +0000

Can’t get away with this one without a comment from me. This is a nice edgy piece, not usually found in fiction. You set up a really fabulous sense of scene, drawing the audience in immediately and incorporate good details for charismatic characters. It’s even kind of funny at the end.

Even though I really like the detail at the beg, I certainly think I would have been more engaged if I read this in 1st POV, which would be difficult since this is just a piece of a story. What’s the dude’s name? Also the dialogue was a bit unrealistic, just a bit of tweeking.

I heart it mucho.

By: risa

risa — Wed, 11 Jan 2006 16:31:28 +0000

i loved it too. great writing. interesting issues. i seem to be attracted to fiction that could pass as memoir…james frey, jt leroy, oso…

By: melissa_cookingdiva

melissa_cookingdiva — Wed, 11 Jan 2006 14:07:54 +0000

I loved it too! Great writting—Now you are giving me ideas…, hmm, food fiction in Spanish?. I should move to a place where people do not sleep at all, that way I´ll have time to read all the blogs and take care of mine too Hugs,

By: logtar

logtar — Wed, 11 Jan 2006 13:57:34 +0000

Fact or Fiction it is an excellent post. I like the way it was written ‘fo sho’

By: cindylu

cindylu — Wed, 11 Jan 2006 07:55:20 +0000

HP,
You and I both know that you are a good six inches shorter than Oso. Plus, I know you both like pho. Scrappy Napoleon seems to fit. What the hell is a Maximus?